I had to watch a video about tigers and then write facts about tigers.
Writing Term 2 2020
WALT (we are learning to) : write sentences in our own words about something we
have either watched, read or done.
have either watched, read or done.
Success Criteria
-write at least ten clear sentences about tigers
-make sure that your sentences make sense. Read them aloud to a family member to check
them.
them.
-use the correct punctuation. Have you got a capital letter at the beginning of the sentence
and a full stop at the end?
and a full stop at the end?
Here is my writing
Did you know that tigers live in Asia. Tigers are massive cats
that can have either reddish orange fur or greyish white fur
with dark vertical stripes. Tigers can grow up to 11 feet long
and weigh up to 660 pounds. Baby tigers are called cubs and
they stay with their mothers until they are 2-3 years old. Tigers
need our help to protect their homes in the forest because
people are cutting down the trees.
that can have either reddish orange fur or greyish white fur
with dark vertical stripes. Tigers can grow up to 11 feet long
and weigh up to 660 pounds. Baby tigers are called cubs and
they stay with their mothers until they are 2-3 years old. Tigers
need our help to protect their homes in the forest because
people are cutting down the trees.
Here are my pictures I did of tigers
Morena Sam. You have done a great job at writing about tigers. You chose some great facts from the video to write about and it was good to see you used some of the key words I asked you too. It is also good to see all your sentences have capital letters and full stops and all your sentences make sense.
ReplyDeleteI love the amazing sketches you did of tigers too Sam. You are such a talented artist!
I really enjoyed being able to listen to you read your writing to me.
Hi Sam, it was lovely to hear you read your story this morning. You had some great information,
ReplyDelete11 feet is really long (it’s just over 3 metres) it’s the same as 3 and a half guitars all lined up on the school library floor - imagine that!
I thought your drawings were fantastic, and I’m really pleased to see you are still doing your art as you are so good at it! :)
Kia ora Sam, I really enjoyed listening to your reading about tigers. You read the word 'vertical' so cleverly! I think that the people who are working with you in your bubble are doing a great job of supporting your learning. Tino pai!
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