Wednesday, 24 July 2019

puppy writing


I have a puppy and it’s name is Archie. He is a boy and it is a golder lab and it is a little dog. It’s name is cleo and it is a girl and it can run very fast like a cheetah and cleo is good and she can run very fast and I can take cleo for a walk to the shop.

Puppy Writing

Bailey’s Puppy.


I have a puppy and it’s name is Buddy. I have
a big brother and his name is Bailey . I have
a puppy and his name is Archie.

Tuesday, 23 July 2019

The Swimming Race - My Writing

My Success Criteria:
-Make my sentences make sense.
 -Use correct punctuation


I did a swimming race against Charlie Frost. I won the race.
I went to a swimming race at club night.
After the race we went to the lolly shop.

My Horse Writing

My Success Criteria:
-Make my sentences make sense.
 -Use correct punctuation


I have a horse and he is eight years old. His name is Goldie and he is big.
Billies mum rode him and he is a boy. I can ride him to the lollie shop.